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Hair so Gold and Lips so Red. by ~AeroMaster:iconAeroMaster:



Of Hair so Gold, and Lips so Red.

   Aero(c)2009



Forward.



How is it that beauty can corrupt a person so? How can it take a small image of yourself and twist it into something far greater than you had originally bargained for? Suppose you have that one reflected image that you see of yourself and you see a gorgeous man or woman before you. As you grow older, you try and try to keep that same look, that same radiant beauty you once had. As years go by, the youthful glow slips from your fingers faster, and you could only powder your way back to your previous looks. You are desperate to keep it, your perfect skin and shining blue eyes.

This was so because beauty was everything in this world. With natural looks comes power, and every human being wanted power. They want the power to control, the power to mold things as they see fit. Human's are truly selfish beings, if this was correct. They can only destroy for what they believe is right. They can only be motivated by what would get them in control. And from this information, I knew I wanted this power of beauty for my child because I thought it was right.

I peered in my vanity mirror sadly at my worn features. Time revealed to me that I was getting older. My face was slightly wrinkled, and my cheekbones not as high. My lips were cracked and eyes sunk from tiredness. My once flowing blonde curls were straight and grey. I could not let this happen to my child. I couldn't. I stood suddenly, slamming my hands down on the dresser. I called my maids to me and asked for my fur coat.

My child will be beautiful, I told myself then as I now stood in a field of snow. The sky's precipitation continued from yesterday to now, and so forth until our God saw fit. My child will be the fairest of them all, and nothing will stop him. I caressed my stomach lovingly as I felt the tiny organism flutter. I closed my eyes and smiled, the cold chilling my bones. In the distance, I heard my maids call out my name; "Miss Namine, please come back!" I couldn't return, not when my end was so near.

So I spoke. I spoke loudly and firmly, asking my God with all my might. I prayed the Heaven's could truly hear me. I wanted my voice to shake the ground and disturb the dead. I wanted my wish to come true. I wanted what I thought was best for my child.

"I want my child, Roxas Strife, with skin as pale as snow, his hair as golden as the sun, and lips as red as blood! I want Roxas to be beautiful!" And so it was done. I never got to see him, my child. However, from the coldness of the last beat of my heart, I knew my wish was granted. My child was gorgeous, just as I had asked, and he would be the powerful man I wanted him to be. Now, I could only watch from the afterlife to see him reap what I have sown.
©2009 ~AeroMaster
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Author's Comments

These characters do not belong to me, dammit. :/

This is the beginning to my JAWSOME AkuRoku fanfiction, using the storyline of Snow White, with my HUGE story twists to it.

This chapter focuses on the death of Roxas' mother, who is Namine. She was the queen of Kingdom Hearts, and she wanted her son be be a great ruler as well. Therefore, she wished beauty on him to make it easier for him to manipulate others into his will. So she prayed and called to her God with all her might to let this happen, and so it did. Roxas was born the way she wanted, with Hair so Gold, and Lips so red, and skin as pale as snow. I hope this concept is interesting....?

BROUGHT TO YOU BY.....AERO! :'D

Chapter One: [link]

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:iconsmexyroxas69:
Snow white is TOTALLY one of my fav scary fairy tales! I want to know how this will continue so so much!

I loved how you described humans and their vain, it's really perfect and, in my opinion, very correct.

I loved how you made Namine be Roxas' mother LOL
Now they cannot be together even in imagination :B

Loved this!

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Jelly likes jellybeans covered in blood, covered in blood, covered in blood. ;~~

Living in a dream by singing lullabies. Yes, I'm a Lost Soul
:iconaeromaster:
YESH, I know right! I wanted to read a Kingdom Hearts one, but I searched FF.NET, and it didn't have any! DX So I decided to make my own, ne~

It is. :/ People use their beauty to corrupt the Earth and use it for manipulation and power, and that will pretty much be the main theme of the story. Though Roxas would naturally hate how....well, beautiful he was born to be and how he attracts others.

YEY, Roxas and Namine can NEVAR BE TOGETHER NOW! >D :evillaugh:

Thanks~

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I met a drugstore cowgirl.
So afraid of getting bored.
She's always running from something.
So many things ignored...


=HopeInDespair is my heart. I LOVE YOU~

Kingdom Hearts Fanfiction Writer and MS Painter.

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:iconsmexyroxas69:
*pats your back* A really good job you're doing at it!

And sweet! I'm not going to be a bitchy witchy comandading asshole!


and nice that we think the same about those two... S2

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Jelly likes jellybeans covered in blood, covered in blood, covered in blood. ;~~

Living in a dream by singing lullabies. Yes, I'm a Lost Soul
:iconaeromaster:
Thanks. *smiles* I want to be a great fanfiction writer like you! *is inspired*

Seriously. That's SO OOC. :/ I hate that concept the most. xD

:highfive: Seriously. xD

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I met a drugstore cowgirl.
So afraid of getting bored.
She's always running from something.
So many things ignored...


=HopeInDespair is my heart. I LOVE YOU~

Kingdom Hearts Fanfiction Writer and MS Painter.

Custom Avvy by =shibbyx-X
:iconsmexyroxas69:
*puppy eyes* Like... me? Man I'm wearing such a idiotic smile on my face.. THANKS SO MUCH! But hey, I think that you write better than me... Your style is different... I like it more than mine... DX


And yes totally agreed!

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Jelly likes jellybeans covered in blood, covered in blood, covered in blood. ;~~

Living in a dream by singing lullabies. Yes, I'm a Lost Soul
:iconaeromaster:
Well, as a writer and an artist, you tend to just want to strive to make your work better and more eye popping. It's natural. If an artist is comfortable with their work, then they simply aren't good enough. I like your writing wheras you like mine....

But I LOOOOOOOOOOOVED your writing~

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I met a drugstore cowgirl.
So afraid of getting bored.
She's always running from something.
So many things ignored...


=HopeInDespair is my heart. I LOVE YOU~

Kingdom Hearts Fanfiction Writer and MS Painter.

Custom Avvy by =shibbyx-X
:iconsmexyroxas69:
ME WANTS TO GET BETTER!


DA made me be more like that! Like... I absolutely love illbewaiting's work and damn it's good, but then I think... What if I someday get better than her.... ?


AWESOME! So I train! Aiming to be the best! *determinate face*


And YEY! So it be like that! We love each other's styles, because they deserve to be loved! We're fuckin' gorgeous!

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Jelly likes jellybeans covered in blood, covered in blood, covered in blood. ;~~

Living in a dream by singing lullabies. Yes, I'm a Lost Soul
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-fan girl scream-Ahhhhh....I can't wait to read more! I wonder how Roxas will act!!! Ohhhh!!!! This is really awesome!

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[AkuRoku Zemyx] Dance on (Into the Night)~ [link] GO WATCH IT!
Is addicted to AKUROKU/ZEMYX/SORAxRIKU AND YAOI

//Cards are in your hands. Hold, fold, call?//
:iconbaka-neechan:
very cool

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Embrace your dreams.....Even if you do not have any

Fixe...the same as Cool and said in the same way was Fish...XD

Please go see KH: Two Lifes, One Heart [link]
:iconaeromaster:
Thanks for the support! I REALLY appreciate it! *smiles* I hope you will stick around to read more?

--
I met a drugstore cowgirl.
So afraid of getting bored.
She's always running from something.
So many things ignored...


=HopeInDespair is my heart. I LOVE YOU~

Kingdom Hearts Fanfiction Writer and MS Painter.

Custom Avvy by =shibbyx-X

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